Deep hues of nightfall
Warm, alone, I own it all
At least until dawn
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this perfect urban
inviolate, peopleless,
non-human heaven
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lights are so pretty
I compose a little poem
not very witty
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Long hot summer night
I have found a reason to live,
walking the city.
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lights stay on for the
cold steel heart of the city
humanity gone
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Hi boys and girls,
Well that last effort was way too weird. A fellow goes away for a week and everything goes nuts. At least it wasn't my fault, ha ha. Was it FB's? FB, for punishment you may NOT have a second helping of ice cream when it's ice cream night. Actually since you're the only one who sends me pix, you can have seconds but only of vanilla or strawberry. No chocolate. (Why do we buy that Napolitana? It's bloody stupid).
Oh, and FB, as for multiple posting that's just some blogger monkey business. I put a note up at the church and I'll do something similar here.
And this week's pic is another from my favourite Finnish blog dyslexia is ok here. What a spooky eye - the right kind of hard-to-describe. I have it pegged as the kind of pic that will say something different to everyone who looks at it. Fingers crossed...
And do click on it for the bigger rez. It's worth it just for more of that eerie, almost-too-intense blue.
Perspective, it's great
It lets you see distance mate
Although it's 2 D
FB
I don’t like strawberry ice cream so I will settle for a double helping of vanilla or is that too greedy? ;-)
Deep hues of nightfall
Warm, alone I own it all
At least until dawn
Shades of night fall in
Blue Electric Avenue
Or a street with no name?
Day gives over to night
Night gives over to neon
And business ego
A single tram track
With no cables or third rails
Crossings for who? – strange.
Just wanted to write and say how much I loved FB's haiku - they were brilliant
Sorry folks, I had a headache that lasted for several days and seemed untouched by regular painkillers. Dope seemed to sort it out but then it was hard to tell if I was convalescing or just stoned.
And FB, very good - a case of 'bingo' for the first one.
this perfect urban
inviolate, peopleless
non-human heaven
nobody,
that was excellent.
trams not used at night
should get a new monorail
like in the simpsons
lights are so pretty
I compose a little poem
not very witty
streets are desolate,
like apocolypse in blog
who pays for the lights?
first time felix
I agree with Su NB it was excellent and yours to anon :) NB hows everything going with your dad and all ? Don't answer if you don't want to :) Just checking :) I was genuinely just hoping everything was good with you ?
Long hot summer night
I have found a reason to live,
walking the city.
der schutte
lights stay on for the
cold steel heart of the city
humanity gone
electric highway
desolate physical world
kings of a lost realm
walk the streets at night
just tryin to get it right
need some patience, yeah
iy, the gnr ballad was the first thing that did come to mind.
okay, john just knocks nobody into the corner and comes forth to take the haiku cup.
Hello boys and girls, sorry I was away for so long. Mind you, it was worth it, it seems, what with so many cool haiku.
And onya Felix, a fine start.
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a process-blue dream
playing out before my eyes
laughingly real
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